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Moria's Race Screenplay

March 21, 2026

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[avatar]by Blender Dumbass

Aka: J.Y. Amihud. A Jewish by blood, multifaceted artist with experience in film-making, visual effects, programming, game development, music and more. A philosopher at heart. An activist for freedom and privacy. Anti-Paternalist. A user of Libre Software. Speaking at least 3 human languages. The writer and director of the 2023 film "Moria's Race" and the lead developer of it's game sequel "Dani's Race".


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The screenplay for the film Moria's Race. ↩ Reply

Original file .vcss is available here. ( Open-able via Blender-Pipeline ). ↩ Reply

This is the original written version, not the final draft. Some ( minor ) changes were done for the film itself. ↩ Reply


INT. HOUSE. 11 (SOMETHING) PM

A toy car is sliding along a toy track. Making a loop and landing on a ground. Moria is right above it. A little 11 yr old girl. She picks up the toy car. ↩ Reply

MORIA

This is not real driving.
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She throws the toy car. A boy catches the toy car. It is Dani. An 8 yr old boy. ↩ Reply

DANI

Of course it's not. It's a toy.
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MORIA

Toys are not cool enough. I can beat a real race.
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Moria comes to the window. There is a futuristic looking small town on a sea. In the sea, on an artificial island, we can see a huge, futuristic racetrack with jumps and loops. ↩ Reply

DANI

No you can't.
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MORIA

I can.
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DANI

You tried already.
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MORIA

We didn't reach the track.
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DANI

Okay... Show me. You never beat me on the simulator.
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Dani is pointing on a computer type device with a steering wheel. ↩ Reply

MORIA

This is not accurate physics.
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DANI

Okay. We have bicycles.
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There are 2 bicycles in the room. Orange one and smaller Bluish one. The Orange just fell and knocked the Bluish one. ↩ Reply

MORIA

They're broken.
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DANI

What do you want to tell me? That you can go there now? Again... Steal a car... And win the race of 12?
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MORIA

Yes.
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Dani rolls his eyes in confusion. ↩ Reply

DANI

No you cant. He locked all the cars.
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MORIA

Bet?
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DANI

Okay... Bet. If I win both simulators are mine for an entire week. But I'll tell you. One. We need to be sleeping. Two. If you leave the house again at night, Paps will be very angry. Three. The cars are locked now. And four. It's 11 something.
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MORIA

So what?
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DANI

We have less then an hour.
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In the window they see a truck arrives. There is a Paps and Jack inside. ↩ Reply

DANI

Paps!
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MORIA

Lights off.
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Lights turn off. Moria and Dani are jumping into beds. Outside, the truck is going to a stop. A tense shot of the door. A few moments later door opens up. Paps is there. He is looking with a serious face. Checking if they are asleep. Checking Dani. Looking to the other way. Checking Moria. Seems fine to him. He closes the door and goes. ↩ Reply

Moria gets up. ↩ Reply

MORIA

I need your help.
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DANI

What do you need me for?
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MORIA

Truck is not locked. But I would not reach the pedals.
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INT. HALLWAY. 11 (SOMETHING) PM

Door opens up. Moria and Dani come out of there into the hallway. ↩ Reply

DANI

How will you win a race on a truck?
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MORIA

No... On the truck we get there. And I gonna do something. I'll get a car from somebody who's on a race.
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DANI

And what if they...?
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MORIA

Shut up, I'm opening the door
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Moria opens the other door. ↩ Reply


INT. GUEST ROOM. 11 (SOMETHING) PM

The entire scene as one shot. ↩ Reply

Moria and Dani come out. There is a huge shelf with books by the door. Very long. They are walking along it. ↩ Reply

MORIA

What would they do? We own the place.
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DANI

But we don't own all the cars.
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MORIA

Okay we try to get our team's car.
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DANI

Jack already has trouble wining. Now you want to make the chances even worse.
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MORIA

I gonna win the race.
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They get to a spiral staircase by the end of the shelf. We see that the whole place is lit by a huge screen with a picture of a racetrack. ↩ Reply

They go down the stairs. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Okay what if he forgot to lock one of the cars.
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DANI

After the last time he sure didn't.
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MORIA

Let's check quickly.
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Camera slowly flies backwards. Revealing the whole place. We see a model of the racetrack in the middle of the room and big collection of various race cars. All blue. ↩ Reply

Moria and Dani start trying to open them. But they are all locked. ↩ Reply


EXT. MORIA'S HOUSE. 11 (SOMETHING) PM

Moria and Dani walk out the house sad. And trying to sneak toward the truck. ↩ Reply

Moria and Dani quietly. ↩ Reply

DANI

We gonna get in trouble again.
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MORIA

This time I know what I'm doing.
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DANI

Last time we could not even reach the sea.
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MORIA

I'm faster now. So shut up.
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DANI

On a truck?
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They are close to the front of the truck. Truck's lights are on. ↩ Reply

DANI

Lights are on.
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MORIA

He is so stupid...
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Paps is standing right behind Moria. ↩ Reply
Dani gets scared. ↩ Reply

MORIA

What?
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PAPS

Who did you call stupid?
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MORIA

Jack...
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A racing driver Jack is coming from around the truck. ↩ Reply

JACK

Me?
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Moria realizes who is behind her. She turns around. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Hi, Paps. Hi, Jack.
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PAPS

Why are you not sleeping? Betting again?
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MORIA

No... Just a ...
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DANI

We were curious.
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PAPS

Curious of what?
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DANI

What are you doing here an hour before the race?
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PAPS

We just got that.
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Everybody goes around the truck. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Probably gonna loose anyway.
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JACK

You are about the tower-spin? I gonna make it.
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PAPS

You say it every time. But for the last 6 months only Tali Stern is doing the tower-spin correctly.
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Moria and Dani go around the truck and see - a cool race car. (with 2 seats.) It's Neonspeedster. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Holly crazyness, it's a real Neonspeedster.
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PAPS

Don't even dream about it.
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MORIA

It's the only car I can reach the pedals of.
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PAPS

You are not getting into it.
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MORIA

Paps?
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PAPS

What?
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MORIA

Let me just sit inside once. I beg you... It's a like a dream car.
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PAPS

No...
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MORIA

Please... Please.
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PAPS

No... Moria... Go sleep.
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Moria is not about to give up. She thinks of something clever. ↩ Reply

MORIA

10 seconds. 10 seconds and I'm out. I just want to feel the wheel of Neonspeedster. Maybe it's my only chance.
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JACK

Well if I fall again from the tower-spin this is the last change for her.
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PAPS

So now you are saying that you are not gonna make it.
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JACK

Ah...
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Paps is getting softer. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Fine. 10 seconds. Dani?
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Moria and Dani enter the car. Paps is holding the door of the car. ↩ Reply

PAPS

10... 9... 8...


Moria presses the start button. Neonspeedster starts up. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Hey!!!
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JACK

Oh... Yes...
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Moria moves the gear lever into the first gear. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Moria! Dani! Get out!!!
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JACK

Come on, Man. What if she does the tower-spin?
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PAPS

She is a kid.
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Moria pushes the gas pedal and the Neonspeedster drives away. Jack is smiling. ↩ Reply

Paps and Jack jump into the truck and drive after the Neonspeedster. ↩ Reply


EXT. DUNE TOWN. 11 (SOMETHING) PM

Neonspeedster with Moria and Dani inside is going fast on the road. The truck with Paps and Jack is right after. ↩ Reply

Ringtone. It's Dani's phone. Dani answers the phone. It's Paps. (it says it on the screen). ↩ Reply

DANI

Don't hit me.
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PAPS

Gimme Moria.
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DANI

Moria. It's Paps.
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MORIA

I'm Driving.
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DANI

Paps, shes driving.
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PAPS

I know. That's why I called you, and not her.
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MORIA

What does he want?
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DANI

What do you want?
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PAPS

What does she want?
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DANI

We are going to win the race at 12
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PAPS

You are children! You can't even drive.
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MORIA

What did he say?
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DANI

You are children, you can't even drive.
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Paps's truck hits a light stand. ↩ Reply

MORIA

That's you, who can't drive.
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DANI

She said you can't drive.
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PAPS

I heard it. I'm on a truck!
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JACK

Do you want me to drive?
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PAPS

Shut up!
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Moria truns from Looparound street to ToRacetrack street. Paps sees it and goes after her. But she already turned onto Smallround street. Paps lost them both. So he stopped. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Dani, where are you both? Dani...
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Neonspeedster keeps ridding along the road alone. Moria turn to the Deepdown street toward the sea. Dani is looking at his phone with a scared face. ↩ Reply

DANI

Moria.
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MORIA

What?
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DANI

I didn't take the charger.
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MORIA

How much percent left?
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DANI

It just turned off.
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Moria looks shocked. Slightly scared. ↩ Reply

DANI

Moria?
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MORIA

Nothing should stop me.
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DANI

Moria? Where is your phone?
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MORIA

It doesn't matter.
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DANI

You forgot it?
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From Moria's eyes falls a tear. Neonspeedster stops. Moria looks at Dani. ↩ Reply

MORIA

It's not too far away yet. Go home.
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DANI

No.
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MORIA

I don't have my phone. Should anything go wrong, there will be no way for me to contact Paps, or anybody.
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DANI

So what? Let's go, get to the race.
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MORIA

How I even gonna get into the race?
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DANI

You are in a car that's in the race.
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MORIA

You sure you want to go with me?
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DANI

No. But I just don't know the way back home.
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Moria smiles. Neonspeedster starts again and goes. ↩ Reply



EXT. DUNE TOWN. NIGHT.

There is an underwater tunnel made of glass that connects the city and the racetrack in the sea. On the entrance to the tunnel there is a road block. And a payment machine that opens the tunnel for those who pay the entrance fee. A couple of cars stop by the block, pay and then pass. ↩ Reply

Neonspeedster is slowly passing by the block. On Looparound street. ↩ Reply

MORIA

We have a problem.
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DANI

What?
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MORIA

The tunnel is Locked. And your phone is dead.
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DANI

No.
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MORIA

Think, think. We need to get pass the sea somehow.
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DANI

I'd build a huge catapult. And throw us like a rock on the water. So we bounce till we get there.
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MORIA

It's unrealistic.
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DANI

I know.
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Moria thinks. ↩ Reply

MORIA

But wait. You are a genius.
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DANI

Where are we gonna build a catapult?
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MORIA

Not the catapult. Forget the catapult. The bounce. We can try doing it.
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Moria turn to onto the Throughsand st. and from that to Toracetrack st. but away from the sea. ↩ Reply

DANI

We will drown.
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MORIA

If we will go with enough speed...
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DANI

Moria! We will drown!
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Moria turns around. So now the car is facing the racetrack and the sea. ↩ Reply

MORIA

It will work. I know.
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DANI

Okay... I'm going home.
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MORIA

Too late.
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Moria floors the gas pedal. Neonspeedster accelerates towards the sea. Moria changes gears. The speed rises to unbelievable. The sea comes. Dani screams. Moria screams too. Neonspeedster jumps off into the see. And indeed bounces. But with such a speed. The car is basically driving on the water. ↩ Reply

Dolphins with weird glowing dots join the Neonspeedster. The sequence is mind-bendingly beautiful. ↩ Reply

Neonspeedster starts sinking. But they are very close to the Racetrack. ↩ Reply

DANI

We are sinking.
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MORIA

We are almost there.
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DANI

I told you we gonna sink.
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The wheels touch the sand in the water. ↩ Reply

MORIA

See it's fine.
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DANI

Well there is a second problem.
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MORIA

No problem I got it.
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Moria drives Neonspeedster out the water. ↩ Reply

DANI

Ah... Don't you see it?
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MORIA

We are already here nothing to worry about.
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DANI

Look up. The wall.
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Dani points his finger on a huge wall that stays on the sand and all of the racetrack is up on top. ↩ Reply

MORIA

We just gonna go around.
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DANI

Moria, there is no way around. Remember the model? Remember the simulator? I know it's a minor detail. But if you get off the track, without the truck, there is no way back on it.
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MORIA

Oh, no... There is gonna be a way.
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DANI

Oh no indeed.
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MORIA

What?
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Dani is looking away with a scared face. ↩ Reply

DANI

Paps and Jack.
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MORIA

Where?
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DANI

There...
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Dani point at the exit from the tunnel. And we see Papses truck getting up from the t to tunnel to the racetrack. ↩ Reply


EXT. RACETRACK. 11 (SOMETHING) PM

Paps is driving and doesn't pay attention. But Jack saw the kids with the side of his eye. ↩ Reply

JACK

Neonspeedster in the sand.
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PAPS

What?
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JACK

I... Nothing.
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PAPS

Where?
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JACK

It looked like the Neonspeedster is over there in the sand.
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Papses truck stops. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Where exactly?
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JACK

Over there...
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Jack points at the Neonspeedster. Papses truck gets closer to the edge. Paps sees the Neonspeedster and the kids. Dani and Moria see him seeing them. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Oh no indeed.
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Papses truck lowers the cargo area down to the kids. We can see on the background other teams trucks are unpacking their cars. RedKiss, DarkShadow, Underground, PoorCharlie and Just3000. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Get in, both of you.
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Moria and Dani go out the car and... ↩ Reply

PAPS

With the Neonspeedster.
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MORIA

I'm a kid I gonna break it.
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PAPS

You drove it all the way to here without a scratch. Do it.
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Moria and Dani sit back into the Neonspeedster and drive into the cargo area. ↩ Reply

Paps looking back at Jack. ↩ Reply

PAPS

They're in, Jack.
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Jack presses something on the tablet in the cabin and the cargo area closes and rises up. Jack drives the truck a bit forward and lowers the cargo down again. Opening it and revealing Neonspeedster with Moria and Dani inside. But this time up on top. ↩ Reply

Moria drives out. ↩ Reply

PAPS

You've lost, get out.
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Moria and Dani are going out of the car and very scared of what going to happen. ↩ Reply

DANI

Don't hit me.
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PAPS

It's illegal.
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MORIA

I just wanted...
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PAPS

We gonna talk later. There is no time. Jack...
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Jack runs to Neonspeedster. ↩ Reply

PAPS

We have 2 minutes. Check the car. Moria, Dani... To the truck. Now!
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Moria and Dani are going to the truck. ↩ Reply

DANI

I think we didn't need to get out of the car. And we needed to go to the race since we up here already.
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MORIA

You could've told me that inside.
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Moria is angrily, sadly, pissed off goes to the Truck. She is about to sit on the front, right seat. But she sees something. It's a helmet. ↩ Reply

Dani sits in the back and Paps comes to the truck as well. Sitting on the front, left side. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Jack will do everything himself.
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Paps put the Truck into the first gear and start's driving. Papses truck drives toward the exit. ↩ Reply

MORIA

You don't want to be here when he loses right?
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PAPS

It's not your business.
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Jack runs besides the truck. From the Papses side. He strikes the truck. Truck stops. Paps opens his door. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Jack, race!
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JACK

I forgot my helmet.
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PAPS

You gotta be kidding me.
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Paps looks back. And there is no helmet and no Moria. The door is open. Dani sits there with a nasty smile. ↩ Reply

Moria runs towards Neonspeedster with the helmet in her hands. ↩ Reply

Paps angrily runs after her. But he is too slow to catch up. Moria gets into the Neonspeedster and puts on the helmet on. ↩ Reply

PAPS

The race!
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Moria drives to the entrance of the race. There are trucks of other teams and other cars. ↩ Reply

Beside those trucks. Like an alley, stand other race cars with their drivers ready to get into the cars. They are gearing up and sitting into the cars. It's Tali Stern with Red Kiss, Mike Fast with Dark Shadow, Michael Hay with Underground, Sharon Lively with Poor Charlie and Fredy Funny with Just 3000. ↩ Reply

They judgmentally look at her while she scarily passing them and coming first onto the racetrack. They follow her. ↩ Reply

Paps doesn't know what to do he takes his phone out. ↩ Reply

JACK

Give her a chance.
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PAPS

But she is a kid...
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JACK

So what?
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Papses eyes are getting sad and emotional. He looks at Jack. Paps has a tear. He wipes it off. ↩ Reply

PAPS

I know. I can call to the helmet.
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Paps dials a number. Jack doesn't know how to react to this. He is confused and slightly scared. ↩ Reply

PAPS

We are going to help her. She is not a professional.
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JACK

Oh.. Okay
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Moria is on the Racetrack. Taking her position on the starting line. Other cars take their positions. ↩ Reply

PAPS

( voice )
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Moria, Moria can you hear me?
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Moria is confused a little. But then she painfully realizes that it's in the helmet. ↩ Reply

MORIA

How do I turn it off?
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PAPS

Moria, no need to turn it off.
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MORIA

Alright I guess or you gonna shut up or I'm going to race with no helmet. You will not stop me.
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PAPS

I'm not trying, Moria...
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There is a light on the start of the track. With 3 dots. One of dots just turned on. Everybody revving their engines. ↩ Reply

PAPS

... those are some insane people you are competing with. We want to help.
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MORIA

You were going from the race.
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PAPS

Now that we have somebody better then Jack, I'm not imbarased to stay. Jack don't take this...
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JACK

It's fine...
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Moria smiles. Second light turns on. ↩ Reply

PAPS

And if you loose we can always say that you are just 11.
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MORIA

It's kind a scary actually.
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PAPS

You've got till here, on a racecar, with not a single scratch. You can do this.
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The third light turns on. ↩ Reply

MORIA

I love you, Paps.
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Everybody starts racing. ↩ Reply

In front of them is a U-turn with a small bridge on top. There is a holographic thing that shows the turn. The racetrack is on the water. If you try to short cut it, you would fall into the water. Everybody is making this turn perfectly. ↩ Reply

Next turn is a U-turn again but to the other side. There is a trap hole with palms for those who try to short cut. Everybody is still fine except of Freddy. He falls into the hole and hits the palm. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Oh god!
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PAPS

It's fine, Moria. Focus.
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Paps, Jack and Dani are on a observation tower looking down at the race. ↩ Reply

Moria gets to a turn with no borders. If she doesn't make the turn, she falls into the water. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Water trap!
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MORIA

I see.
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Mike hits her slightly with his back. Moria is edging the fall... ↩ Reply

DANI

Oh no.
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Moria is trying to steer her way back up to the track. She looses positions. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Come on.
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Moria makes it back. Though last place. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Easy.
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After a couple of normal turns. There is a section of a narrow closed part of the track. Everybody is driving this part slower. But when they get out, they are accelerating very quickly. ↩ Reply

Moria is out too. Moria is trying to overtake Michael that's right in front of her. There are a few turns where she attempts an overtake. But she can't. Michael is positioning himself in-front so she could not overtake. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Move!
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PAPS

Don't worry, you can try overtaking in the tube. There is a lot more space to do it.
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After the next turn. There is a huge, glass pipe going underwater. It's a very pretty image. ↩ Reply

In the tube while having more space and daring to ride on the top part of the tube she overtakes Michael and Mike. There are only 2 left in front. Sharon Lively and Tali Stern. ↩ Reply

Moria gets out the tube and her view fills up with a huge loop that's in front of them. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Ah... Moria... A loop...
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MORIA

I see it.
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PAPS

Maybe...
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MORIA

I gonna go full speed on this one.
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PAPS

Oh no!
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Moria is switching gears just perfectly to get maximum acceleration. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Not fast enough. I know....
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Moria switches for a moment to a lower gear. Revving the engine to it's maxed out. And then switches back to the highest gear. Getting a little boost from it. ↩ Reply

She goes onto the loop right after Sharon. Dani, Paps and Jack are looking at it in fear and excitement. ↩ Reply

Moria makes the loop. But there is another loop. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Moria... Second loop!
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MORIA

I know, relax.
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Moria does the trick with the gears again. Boosting again. And going on the second loop after Sharon. ↩ Reply

Sharon wasn't fast enough so she slightly looses grip to the track and slights. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Oh... Oh...
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Sharon lands, but stars spinning. Moria passes just in time for her to have space beside Sharon. But Mike and Michael crash right into Sharon. ↩ Reply

Michael is in the water, Mike is upside down. So is Sharon. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Are they okay?
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PAPS

Stop caring. Focus.
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MORIA

Are they?
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Paps looks at the incident. Everybody is fine. Michael is swimming in the water, Mike is standing there helping Sharon to get out. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Seems fine.
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MORIA

How far away is Tali?
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PAPS

She is doing the tower-spin. Moria. Stop. Only Tali can manage the tower-spin.
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MORIA

I'll give it a shot.
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PAPS

There is no structural thing that keeps you on the track. If you fall, it's a very serious change of death, Moria.
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MORIA

Do you want me to try making it without the helmet?
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Tali is going up the tower-spin. A huge upward road that ends very high in the air with U-turn. And then a huge road back down. ↩ Reply

Tali climbs up and makes the turn. She is very good at this. She smiles. But then she looses grip on the way back. She is not smiling anymore. The back of the car is getting way too heavy and turns the car upside down as she falls. ↩ Reply

The curvature of the ending catches the front of the car and gives it a bump. Tali slides upside down across the road up to the turn in the end. Then her car due to friction rotates back to normal. And lands on the wall of the track. So her wheels do not touch the ground. She is trapped. ↩ Reply

PAPS

Oh my god, Moria. Stop!
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MORIA

No...
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Moria climbs the tower-spin. Paps, Jack and Dani are on the edge. Flashes of photographs are everywhere. Moria is on the top. She turns scraping the edge of the turn. She looses grip as well. ↩ Reply

Everybody is scared. Moria is scared. ↩ Reply

On the curve on the bottom Moria gets the grip back and lands perfectly. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Wow!!!
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Paps, Jack and Dani are super happy. ↩ Reply

Moria stops near Tali's car. Tali sees her. She looks angry at first. But then she realizes that Moria just did the tower-spin. Tali looks back at Moria with a more accepted face and gives her a thumbs up. ↩ Reply

Moria slowly reverses to bump Tali's car out of the trap. Tali is ready to race now. ↩ Reply

Paps, Jack and Dani look at each other. ↩ Reply

Moria gestures Tali to go. Tali gestures Moria to go. Moria raises a finger 'I have an idea'. Tali looks carefully. Moria starts a countdown with her fingers. 5... 4... 3... 2... 1... GO.... ↩ Reply

Race starts again. Moria and Tali are having the same exact position for a very big chunk of the road. A turn. Tali goes ahead. Moria is not about to give up. ↩ Reply

The finish line is around a corner. Moria is scared to lose. Paps, Dani and Jack are looking at it with faces of tension. ↩ Reply

Last turn. Moria is close. Tali is deep in her thoughts. Moria overtakes her barely on the last turn. And goes just a little ahead at the finish line. Moria wins. ↩ Reply

Neonspeedster and RedKiss stop. Tali opens her hatch and gets out the car. Moria sits in the Neonspeedster unable to comprehend what just happened. ↩ Reply

A lot of camera flashes. Light comes on Moria's face from all direction. ↩ Reply

MORIA

Dani?
↩ Reply

DANI

Yes?
↩ Reply

MORIA

Told you...
↩ Reply

THE END

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